You captured something most people miss about transformationβthat itβs not just about becoming, but about letting go of a version of yourself you once survived through. That split you wrote aboutβthe psychic ruptureβthatβs real. And Iβve felt it.
I also loved how gently you held Nicholasβs story. You didnβt turn it into a lesson. You just let it breathe. The details, the couches, the photos, the quiet tensionβ¦ it made the piece feel alive and human.
Thank you for sharing this. Itβs a powerful reminder that we donβt need to be finished to be whole.
Loved this chapter both times I read / listened to it. So glad itβs getting promoted! π
Thanks so much for publishing, Anton!
Kara,
This was beautiful.
You captured something most people miss about transformationβthat itβs not just about becoming, but about letting go of a version of yourself you once survived through. That split you wrote aboutβthe psychic ruptureβthatβs real. And Iβve felt it.
I also loved how gently you held Nicholasβs story. You didnβt turn it into a lesson. You just let it breathe. The details, the couches, the photos, the quiet tensionβ¦ it made the piece feel alive and human.
Thank you for sharing this. Itβs a powerful reminder that we donβt need to be finished to be whole.
βAnton
Thank you so much for the careful comments. And thank you for the opportunity to collaborate!